" Stop showing
You love me
A little at a time.
Stop saying
You care
Bit by bit.
Stop keeping
Me here
For tiny pieces of time.
Because I need
All of you
Not piece by piece.
I love
All of you
Not just some parts of you.
So love all of me
All the way
All the time.
Or let all of me go
All at once
For good. "
by
She also blogs at http://vergeoflove.com.
I read this once, then read it over and over again. It's so short and simple but drives the point home so amazingly. That's the reason why I shared it over here.
XoXo,
Ni.
Loved it! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing it!
I'm glad you loved it!
DeleteThanks Kiara. <3
We all need all of someone..
ReplyDeleteYes, we do. :]
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Wow, pretty powerful stuff, especially considering the simplicity, the brevity n the message of it :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful verses :)
Exactly. So blunt and simply put, affected and came across more!
DeleteThank you for dropping by Raj :]
xx
lovely.. :) <3
ReplyDeleteI agree! :D
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xx
That hit the point home! I can completely relate to each line.Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteMy world, my thoughts, my musings...
Exactly. Each line, everything is so beautifully put. Wow!
DeleteThank you for dropping by Upasana. :]
xx
wow this was really good :)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you agree S! :]
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Really poignant,yet so simple. Loved it! <3
ReplyDeleteI totally agree. The simplicity is wonderful! :]
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Beautiful one!...simple and sweet!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing dear!
Thank you Valli. :*
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