Would you stay if I ask you to?
Would you care if I tell you I love you?
Don't leave me hanging in here.
Don't leave me at all.
I need you close to me, need you near ..
Miss the train. Pull me close.
Hug me tight. Kiss my nose.
This is like a continuation to my previous poem 'Goodbye'.
XoXo,
Ni.
P.S : My main blog 'Tales of and by her' completes one year on the 1st of July. Drop by sometime :]
massively talented you are! :)
ReplyDeletemuch love .. xxx <3
Such sweet words, thank you so much! :D
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I think we've all felt that way from time to time.. no one likes saying goodbye.. that's for sure. It's very hard to do.. Beautiful as always blahblah and I love the anime picture!
ReplyDeleteI completely agree! It is very hard.
DeleteThanks a lot Crystal! xx
omg omg soooo cute :D
ReplyDeleteHaha, thank you S! :D
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Awesome !!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Rahul! :] x
Delete"would you care if i tell u i love you?"
ReplyDeleteThis line lashed me, i don't know why.
I so wish to be proposed with such intense love. hahah
& congo for the blogoversary. Way to go! Cheers
It lashed at me too .. It just is so blunt, like I don't really know how to tell you what I feel reading it, but reading your comment makes me feel you got it,y'know?
DeleteOh, I wish so too. Poetry, verses read out to me. That'd be SO cool! :D
And thank you. <3 x
Incredibly lovely. This line really got to me, for some reason: "Miss the train. Pull me close." :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Nina.
DeleteAw, I feel you. Really!
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lovely post. x
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Yusra! :D x
Deletelovely post. x
ReplyDeleteaww..lovely <3
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Thank you so much Megha! x
DeleteAww...Very cute poem...and lovely pictures...I love anime pictures <3
ReplyDeleteThank you so mucn Valli! :] xx
Deleteawesome :) nicely expressed!
ReplyDeleteDo stop by my blog sometime :)
Thanks a lot Ash!
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