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Monday, 23 January 2012

That Girl





I'm that girl with the loudest laugh, sometimes it is embarrassing,
When I'm deliriously happy, I randomly start to sing.

The one who looks at all her pretty friends and feels inadequate.

I'm that girl who looks at the mirror trying to find something worth being happy about,
who silently cries, breaks down when you shout.

I'm that girl who won't question your intentions,
who'll keep trusting you, unaware that you were in only for fun.

I'm that girl who may build opinions pretty fast,  but I never hesitate to change them.

I'm that girl, awkward, sitting alone,
The one, while you all are already interacting,  is staring blankly at her phone.

 I'm that girl who really wants to tell you how she feels,
Who is scared those feelings may somehow hurt you, so she keeps her lips sealed.

I'm that girl who listens to songs and writes down stuff to avoid goin crazy,
Who maintains a diary, doesn't want those good memories to turn hazy.

I'm that girl who gets goosebumps, smiles and cries her heart out listen to a T.Swift song,
Because her songs say what I'd want to say,
In the best possible way.

I'm all this. And much much, much more!! Sometimes a bore. Even an eye-sore.
I'm that girl.


P.S : I had written this in a state of crying+pissed. But then you know what they say about crying, anger and truth ;)

XoXo,
N.

51 comments:

  1. you are really a special girl :)

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  2. Hmm..I am that girl also sometimes..ever changing

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    1. I guess, in a way we all are..no?
      Thanks for commenting =)

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  3. :) That's wonderful! Don't ever change and conform to what other people believe how you should be.

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  4. aww... :*

    u speak for every girl who is pissed+angry+crying..

    wonderfully said babes.. and I agree that the best blogs turn out in such desperate moments..

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    1. Aww. I'm glad!
      Thanks a lot. Means so much!
      xo

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  5. You know, a person looks much - much more beautiful when the person clears the head and heart.
    You just did. :)

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    1. That is just the nicest thing somebody has ever said to me online.
      Wow.
      *hugs tiiight*

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  6. You are the girl who loves life

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  7. That was really really expressive poem.....This poem states that you are unhappy at present...Hope everything gets well soon :)

    I too had written such kinda poem :)

    http://poetrymyfeelings.blogspot.com/2011/01/im-just-incomplete.html

    Please have a look if you have time :)

    Happy blogging

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    1. Thank you so much for dropping by, I checked that poem of yours and it is BEAUTIFUL! =)
      xo

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  8. I cant beleive it, it felt so fimiliar. I am so much of that girl. This was one fantabulous post. But if that means you have to be sad and pissed to write such posts I hope you never write them again.

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    1. Aww Niaa!
      *hugs you tiiightly*
      That was so very sweet. ^.^

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  9. The thing that I like a lot about this post is just about every girl can relate to it :) well done

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  10. This is a typical Aries female rant. I'd know too, being one myself. :)
    I could relate in all lines, especially here "I'm that girl who won't question your intentions,
    who'll keep trusting you, unaware that you were in only for fun."

    beautiful writing! maybe we want to follow each other? :)

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    1. Hahaha. Aries unite *fist bump* xD
      Thanks a lot Diksha :)

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  11. Loved this onee much :D
    "I'm that girl who listens to songs and writes down stuff to avoid goin crazy,
    Who maintains a diary, doesn't want those good memories to turn hazy"

    A wonderful read :)
    Follow each other

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  12. woooww beautiful sweetheart.. :)

    hugs n kisses... :)

    take care
    Niya

    niya101.blogspot.com

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  13. And....I am that girl who love to read your writing <3

    http://bongsbelleza.blogspot.com/

    Love,

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    1. Awwwww!
      I'm flattered, really :')
      Thanks love!

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  14. I believe you are such a wonderful girl!

    Love
    /S / http:// mydarlingsolitude.blogspot.com

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  15. We're all girls, and inevitably, we've all gone through the same feeling at some point in our lives.

    Here's to acknowledging it!

    :)

    http://thenzeebzsays.blogspot.co.nz/

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    1. I so agree. Glad I'm not the only one!
      Thanks for commenting :)

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  16. Wow... this speaks to me so much. Although I listen to The Fray n not Taylor Swift!
    (hugs)

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    1. Haha :D, *hi-5*
      Thanks a lot <3
      *tiight hugs*

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  17. I feel this, alright! so well written, :')

    love,
    nil.
    www.meetnil.blogspot.com

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  18. emotions are felt reflected when felt. agree with nil here. well expressed.

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  19. Beautiful blog here.
    #NowFollowing :D

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  20. This is a very well expressed poem. I feel like I can really connect to this poem.

    www.modernworld4.blogspot.com

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    1. I'm glad you can connect to it, and thank you so much :)

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  21. Pretty heavy! I hope you feel better now!

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  22. It totally sums up the she in 'Teenage'
    Pretty engrossing i could't leave till the end :)
    You have a Chirpy and refreshing blog!

    Alcina-Afixxion Addixt

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  23. Totally spell bound by your poem :)
    And im the same 2
    wish I had written it (damn!)

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    1. Thank you so much. Haha, hi-5!
      :P Someday you will write something, and it'll be my turn to say that ;)

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  24. The "that girl" poem is good stuff. The kind of good stuff that is rare in poetry nowadays ever since modernists decided to ruin poetry with their free verse mania. The poem could very well be the equivalent of Kamala Das' "About me" , or any single greatest poem by Emily Dickinson, the added benefit being that it actually has a nice structure and rhyme. When I succeed in finishing and publishing my first 80 sonnets , then I'd also like to include and collect such poetry(good poetry ), edit them, and use it as ammunition to undo all the bad done to poetry (especially bad poetry by established Indian poets-Free Verse crap).

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